Together As One
Rachel
In the dark of night,
The stars shone bright
And sang their happy song.
The moon spoke to the stars;
Of their journey’s a far
All of them absorbed for so long.
The sky took them in,
As it’s own kin
It sang them all to sleep;
Together as one they were to stay
Forever in its’ keep.
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A human being is a part of the whole called by us universe, a part limited in time and space. He experiences himself, his thoughts and feeling as something separated from the rest, a kind of optical delusion of his consciousness. This delusion is a kind of prison for us, restricting us to our personal desires and to affection for a few persons nearest to us. Our task must be to free ourselves from this prison by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature in its beauty.
-Albert Einstein
-Albert Einstein
7 comments:
Rachel,
I like how you compared the sky to a parent who takes care of the stars and "took them in, as it's own kin." Very clever.
Lesli
well how goes it rachel?i like this poem it's fancy. you used a lot of confusing words, you sure stumped me. good job. keep writing you can go along way.
james m. (from 2nd 3rd and 4th period)
HEY RACHE, i really liken your pome.
the way you right every thing with a human characteristic. it's way kool!
cas-
Hey girl...i really love the personification that you give to the stars and the moon. Your poem is nice. Keep up the good work.
-H2-
Good job Rachel!!!!!!
Your first poem was good, this poem blows it away.
If you ever want to write you have the ability and sense to.
i like how you make the night seem so safe. alicia
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