Friday, April 11, 2008

Snow

SNOW
As the snow falls greyly upon the ground,
it screams at the thought of killing trees.
It’s tired and low,
blowing kisses to the flowers hiding underneath.
Yet now it’s cold,
they feel dark and blue.
It bellows with the wind and,
cries in pain.

-Nikole-

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Damn, that is some powerful stuff. I really like how you described the "screaming" of the snow at the trees. I also like the theme of the entire poem. It is beautiful.

Lesli said...

Nikole,

Wow! Excellent personification. Usually people think of snow as peaceful, but I liked your images of pain and screaming. It is a refreshing contrast.

Lesli

Anonymous said...

that is a cool poem.





kristell